Sidelined The Movie Draft 1

This is our First Draft for Sidelined The Movie with the link.



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9lyuXr0m3to

Our first draft was not that great because we didn't put a lot of effort in editing and all we put in the opening was  of Isaac playing football. Even the footage with Isaac just playing football looked really dull and boring because it didn't grab your attention it was just some guy playing football in silent. and our scenes was too long even after we edited the footage such as the way Isaac was in the scene for longer than he was meant to be in made it look like we extending each scene due to the how short our opening was. The fact is we were doing this because we realised we didn't film enough to go above a minute and so we tried to make the clips longer to use more of the time which is another poor mistake we made. Also there was no sound used whatsoever in the opening all you can hear in the background was the wind noises which was loud and this showed how poor and terrible we edited the first time. Our first draft looks nothing like what we imagine our project to be like and so we knew we had to fix up the editing and film more footage involving other characters. We also decided to find a good location for the other characters and bring in some sound and titles in to actually make it look like a opening two minutes of a film.

                                                                                    0:27                               >>>                                  0:28                                                                         

            0:29                               >>>                                  0:30

What I mean by extending the clip.